Friday, November 26, 2010

Somewhen Between

I'm somewhen between
the veil and the day
the color of singing,
the cool sound of blue ~

Somewhere I lean
against breath of the sky
and touch the horizon
that curls into you ~

Sometime I gather
the scent of my dreaming
and fold up the night
in pockets of sand ~

Then sweep up the notions
that rain from the darkness,
tumbling like fire
to the palm of my hand ~


  1. a gentle song M, deceptive in the whisper that undercuts the colours the ear beautifully

  2. A great compliment coming from you, B

  3. Beautifully written with mentally stimulating images. Thanks for sharing.

  4. Wow. just checked out your site for the first time. good stuff. @SilentAintEasy

  5. Thanks for dropping by ~ appreciate it

  6. particularly like the way you interlock stanza in pairs by rhyming the last lines of each. Fine work here, yes ma'am

    Kind regards

    Luke @ WordSalad

    have a great Xmas and New Year! Aye

  7. Thank you Luke- the interlocking /pairs thing just happens- I think in rhyme and beats, I guess. So glad you liked!

  8. There is a very smoothe and sentimental tone to this piece; that feels and tastes like dusk. RS