tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1394840219282054026.post6272836732359063183..comments2023-06-25T03:40:08.560-07:00Comments on And Then Some: the tumbledown poetry of Miriam Dunn: Somewhen BetweenMiriam Dunnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07479741400543267115noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1394840219282054026.post-16550542459349815472011-07-14T10:36:15.617-07:002011-07-14T10:36:15.617-07:00There is a very smoothe and sentimental tone to th...There is a very smoothe and sentimental tone to this piece; that feels and tastes like dusk. RSRasiihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10635336690574067102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1394840219282054026.post-76001567473127646082010-12-29T10:51:31.014-08:002010-12-29T10:51:31.014-08:00Thank you Luke- the interlocking /pairs thing just...Thank you Luke- the interlocking /pairs thing just happens- I think in rhyme and beats, I guess. So glad you liked!Miriam Dunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07479741400543267115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1394840219282054026.post-65482457240105463842010-12-24T12:11:40.085-08:002010-12-24T12:11:40.085-08:00particularly like the way you interlock stanza in ...particularly like the way you interlock stanza in pairs by rhyming the last lines of each. Fine work here, yes ma'am<br /><br />Kind regards<br /><br />Luke @ WordSalad<br /><br />have a great Xmas and New Year! AyeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1394840219282054026.post-14372890713055970342010-12-01T05:19:56.680-08:002010-12-01T05:19:56.680-08:00Thanks for dropping by ~ appreciate itThanks for dropping by ~ appreciate itMiriam Dunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07479741400543267115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1394840219282054026.post-79454888070651664722010-11-29T19:22:30.917-08:002010-11-29T19:22:30.917-08:00Wow. just checked out your site for the first time...Wow. just checked out your site for the first time. good stuff. @SilentAintEasyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1394840219282054026.post-15401264837771224382010-11-28T19:20:54.978-08:002010-11-28T19:20:54.978-08:00Beautifully written with mentally stimulating imag...Beautifully written with mentally stimulating images. Thanks for sharing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06976483456489113897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1394840219282054026.post-33790616948252265442010-11-28T16:59:26.611-08:002010-11-28T16:59:26.611-08:00A great compliment coming from you, BA great compliment coming from you, BMiriam Dunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07479741400543267115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1394840219282054026.post-54372483735749823512010-11-27T08:31:38.577-08:002010-11-27T08:31:38.577-08:00a gentle song M, deceptive in the whisper that und...a gentle song M, deceptive in the whisper that undercuts the passion...it colours the ear beautifullyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com